Drop the discussion in the second paragraph about the server choosing to
reexecute the query.  It is transparent to the user and confusing.  Say
flatly that the result set will not change during its life, but that the
documents that it points at might change.

Omit the discussion on how multiple schemas might be supported.  (Everything
after the first sentence in paragraph 3.)

Did we agree that the unit for TTL's was minutes?  I don't remember.
Whatever it is, say it explicitly, not simply referred to in the example.

Thanks, Ray!

Ralph

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ray Denenberg [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: Friday, June 21, 2002 2:54 PM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: draft result set model
>
>
> I've drafted an srw/u result set model:
> http://www.loc.gov/z3950/agency/zing/resultsetmodel.html
>
> Please review and comment.
>
> --Ray
>