> Drop the discussion in the second paragraph about the server choosing to
> reexecute the query. It is transparent to the user and confusing. Say
> flatly that the result set will not change during its life, but that the
> documents that it points at might change.
> Omit the discussion on how multiple schemas might be supported. (Everything
> after the first sentence in paragraph 3.)
Done these two.
> Did we agree that the unit for TTL's was minutes? I don't remember.
> Whatever it is, say it explicitly, not simply referred to in the example.
I don't think the model is the appropriate place to specify the unit. If we
want to say it explicitly, we should say it in the service definition.