Thanks John, these are fixed now.  --Ray

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> From: Discussion of the Developing Date/Time Standards
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> Subject: [DATETIME] Draft submission
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> I was just looking at the draft submission of EDTF
> (http://www.loc.gov/standards/datetime/pre-submission.html) and noticed
that
> the last paragraph of 5.3.5 is basically a restatement of the preceding
> paragraph.  Was that intentional?
> 
> Also, in the table of contents a line break is wanted before 5.3.7.
> 
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